All Comments on 'The Cherry Poppers Ch. 11'

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H.H.MorantH.H.Morantabout 16 years ago
You would think the author would learn

The story line involves the defloration of numerous maidens - none of which has had her hymen where God put it in the female of the species a long, long time ago, to wit: the hymen is NOT inside the vagina

Otherwise, this story wasn't very good the first time it was posted, and hasn't gotten any better on its eleventh iteration

Not much of the rest of the story is believable, either

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Enjoying the Series

It is interesting in that most of us have never had one cherry. But I convinced two women that I was a virgin

wher I got a sympathy screw from one 8 and the other 10 years older.

Dr. Raoul DukeDr. Raoul Dukeabout 16 years ago
Worth waiting for!

I was wondering when the next installment of this series was going to come, and it was worth the wait. Hopefully we won't have as long to wait for Chapter 12.

As to the other person who gave this story a 0 rating, I'd point out that *most* stories I've read here seem to operate under the misconception that the hymen is inside the vagina rather than part of the external genitalia. I hope you've done your due diligence and crapped on EVERY author who's submitted a story in the First Time category with this error, and not just this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

Please continue with this series cause i really love reading the stories and would like to see him take kira and her roomates cherries nest then stop when he get a commitment from beth

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Stuff

Great stuff, I've gone back and read the previous chapters and the writing is hot and the descriptions vivid. Like the idea that his main goal is to give the women pleasure during their first time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
The main thing is...

...that the girl-to-woman ENJOYS HER FIRST FUCK. If she doesn't, it will be a long time before she trusts any man to go DOWN THERE even for cunnilingus! SHE'S GOT TO ENJOY THE FIRST ONE or it'll be a helluva long time before she gets up enough courage to try 'it' a second time. And FORGET about ass-fucking. She don't want 'it' in 1 hole, forget about the other 1!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Dammit....

I can't remember if I read this ENTIRE story or not!

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