by BlewWater69
The story line involves the defloration of numerous maidens - none of which has had her hymen where God put it in the female of the species a long, long time ago, to wit: the hymen is NOT inside the vagina
Otherwise, this story wasn't very good the first time it was posted, and hasn't gotten any better on its eleventh iteration
Not much of the rest of the story is believable, either
It is interesting in that most of us have never had one cherry. But I convinced two women that I was a virgin
wher I got a sympathy screw from one 8 and the other 10 years older.
I was wondering when the next installment of this series was going to come, and it was worth the wait. Hopefully we won't have as long to wait for Chapter 12.
As to the other person who gave this story a 0 rating, I'd point out that *most* stories I've read here seem to operate under the misconception that the hymen is inside the vagina rather than part of the external genitalia. I hope you've done your due diligence and crapped on EVERY author who's submitted a story in the First Time category with this error, and not just this one.
Please continue with this series cause i really love reading the stories and would like to see him take kira and her roomates cherries nest then stop when he get a commitment from beth
Great stuff, I've gone back and read the previous chapters and the writing is hot and the descriptions vivid. Like the idea that his main goal is to give the women pleasure during their first time.
...that the girl-to-woman ENJOYS HER FIRST FUCK. If she doesn't, it will be a long time before she trusts any man to go DOWN THERE even for cunnilingus! SHE'S GOT TO ENJOY THE FIRST ONE or it'll be a helluva long time before she gets up enough courage to try 'it' a second time. And FORGET about ass-fucking. She don't want 'it' in 1 hole, forget about the other 1!