by BlewWater69
That was another great Chapter that you wrote about Jason and his women. It looks like Jason is going to lose Beth because of the contest that he is participating in about the virginity. If he keeps on cheating on her she's going to find out and leave him. I can hardly wait to see what you do in the next chapter.
Aren't we popping cherries here? Please don't turn this into a group story. I'm starting to dislike this guy where before I was rooting for him. Please keep a good thing going.
You're story was good before with all the seduction and cherry popping. You need to get back to that before the story unravels becuase you're trying too hard to do something other than pop cherries.
Aw poor Beth. Feel so sorry for her. That cheating bastard is going to break her heart, can't stop shagging anything that moves.
Maggie