All Comments on 'The Cherry Poppers Ch. 28'

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Anonymousover 14 years ago

Now you're talking

Number 20 is worth the wait. Liked the drama with Beth and the transformation of Haden. If this is being published as a book, please ask them to provide a copy editor so that the several instances of wrong word use (of for off, etc.) are fixed. This has been a good read and you deserve to be presented well.

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Part 2 where is it?

You said you would post it right after part 1 and we've yet to get it!

I like how your making the turmoil with Beth. Although I do hope they work out! Hurry lusting after Part 2!

Michaelphyte over 14 years ago

tHANK YOU; One of the best I'v read online

At first I expected this to be another repetitive jerk fest but am pleased with the the high standard of the writing and WANT TO SEE HOW IT ENDS :) MORE PLEASE :)

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

ANOTHER 5 STARS

What an exciting series

Paul in Oklahoma

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