All Comments on 'The Cherry Poppers Ch. 28'

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Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

ANOTHER 5 STARS

What an exciting series

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Michaelphyte over 14 years ago

tHANK YOU; One of the best I'v read online

At first I expected this to be another repetitive jerk fest but am pleased with the the high standard of the writing and WANT TO SEE HOW IT ENDS :) MORE PLEASE :)

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Part 2 where is it?

You said you would post it right after part 1 and we've yet to get it!

I like how your making the turmoil with Beth. Although I do hope they work out! Hurry lusting after Part 2!

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Now you're talking

Number 20 is worth the wait. Liked the drama with Beth and the transformation of Haden. If this is being published as a book, please ask them to provide a copy editor so that the several instances of wrong word use (of for off, etc.) are fixed. This has been a good read and you deserve to be presented well.

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