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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Short but hot.

Lady,for a new comer as a writer you have not done a bad job...you could do better. Great efforts and out put...short but hot. Keep up the erotic spirit. Good luck.

kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com

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