All Comments on 'The Chosen One'

I liked your story quite a bit, it was clearly well written and you have a great way with words. I'm not sure how this is considered non-con/reluctance though.

Very well written. I quite enjoyed the breadth of your vocabulary, the way you used it to infuse the story with emotions.

Looking forward to the next part of this tale.

...in bed with both of you. Hot. Dirty. Passion at its best - Vicki