All Comments on 'The Chosen One Ch. 03'

I know this is fiction, but are you really sure that's the target you want to go after? Love the cane thing, didn't see that coming.

I JUST LOVE YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR. I LOVE THE FACT THAT AS I READ YOUR STORIES I FEEL LIKE I'M RIGHT THERE IN THE MIX OF THINGS. THIS STORY IS GOING TO BE JUST AS GREAT AS THE PANDORA EFFECT AND THEY WALK AMONG US. I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT POST.

...have the next chapter now? I mean, now? :)

This was another great chapter. Keep them coming. For your fans who never think you write fast enough and have become as enthralled with your SEAL stories as I have; I would like to recommend a real book from Kindle. It is THE RED CIRCLE, My life in the navy SEAL sniper corps and how I trained America's deadliest marksmen by BRANDON WEBB. This book made me appreciate your stories even more, and that my friend is pretty damn hard to do. KAK

Can we have more NOW please :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

This is outstanding! I am very greatful that you started this series, each chapter is better than the last, and your stories just seem to be getting better. I can wait until the next chapter Keep up the great work!

Is was so good that I need to go to chapter 4 right now......

I am enjoying your stories. Keep it up. One technicality. SIG SAUER P226 pistols DO NOT have external safeties. Yes, SEALS have used P226's since the 80's, but the US Navy never issued them. Teams had to buy them themselves.

When and where did Kevin meet Laura?

Thank you for that point of fact. I will have to refine my research. Thank you for pointing that out to me. My readers always keep me honest.

I'm thinking this would make for a great movie.