All Comments on 'The Chosen One Ch. 07'

Great chapter! I can't wait for the wedding. No matter how it starts, I'm sure it will be beautiful in the end. Also, remind me to never drink from the castles wine cellar. Ouch, lol.

Why do I get this sinking feeling in the bottom of my stomach that we just saw Nadia at the bar? She's either the blonde or the old lady. I got a buck on the old lady.

Yes the romantic in me loves the fact that we have returned to the castle. Without the castle this story wouldn't have the history it has and w/o the history the story/series would be lacking. And a wedding, boneams you really are tugging at the romance which only seems fair considering there's going to be a battle in the near future. Now as we all wait for the next chapter we have to try and figure out who the bad gal is and what will Kevin use as a ring......hehehe

Ok, I'm hooked on these characters...and I can't wait until next chapter and the wedding.

I am going to guess that he uses Baldomr and Nevanka's rings for the wedding or at least some other ring from a display. I agree with others - the blonde is probably Nadia - can not wait to figure out how she found them though. The plot line of this story gets more and more astounding as you go my dear friend. The mystery and intrigue are making my mind whirl. But that is a good thing. hugs

Got to love a man that would think to spring a surprise wedding regardless of the train wreck he's probably going to make of it. Can't wait to see this wedding. You are a hopeless romantic bones. Hating for it to be coming closer to an end but a joy to read as always. Thanks for sharing hon.

~G~

Who would think that a big bad Navy Seal could be so romantic with a surprise wedding. Kevin is a romantic at heart...

LOVED IT

You have created a great story. You have drawn all your readers in. I am a hopeless romantic. I hope you give me a happy ending, however happy ending or not, I just love reading your work. Thanks for posting it on Lit!

Have I told you lately how amazing you are? I've been able to watch your growth as a writer, and been privileged to call you friend for quite a while now, and you never cease to impress me. Another fantastic installment...you've managed to carve a niche for yourself here in the Literotica community that appeals to both men and women alike, and there aren't many authors that can say that. Your stories are packed full of intrigue and a fantastic balance between violence and sentimentality that just keeps me coming back for more. I wish that the ratings went higher than 5 stars, my friend, but since they don't, that will have to be what I give! Well done!