by TheGreatLakes
Great little story you have going .Enjoying it ,thank you for the good read .
I like your scfi style. Please continue the series all the way to conclusion.
This is a very enjoyable story, it will be interesting to see where you take it. You write very well.
I also enjoy your style of writing and the sci-fi series is very interesting. I love how it flows and it just feels right. Hope you continue this series to completion as well. Thanks for your time and imagination!!
Like you could say that I actually hate them. But finished this in one sitting. I think the alien shit helped. Humans can't just be detached about sex with whole family like this imo. So the alien shit definitely helps to fathom it.
I loved this chapter and the whole series so far but you would think that if the chosen had been on earth for hundreds or thousands of years they would have had the males impregnating women left and right to spread the good dna as far and wide as possible so they would have a wide pool of chosen when the time came. you write very good incest/scifi stories I hope to read more of what you have written so please keep writing
Well, you've kept me up past my normal bedtime, but I'll hang in to the final chapter. God, I love sci/fi; especially when it's coupled with really good incest . . . .