All Comments on 'The Christmas Market'

Wunderbar, Thanks.

Es war wirklich gut!

Yeah, I used google translate for my title. I meant sweet but not saccharine (saccharin was the first synthetic sugar. Too sweet, and could easily become bitter.) Nice pacing, interesting but not teen age stroke sex scenes. This begs another chapter, or three if you're so inclined.

Danke, vielen vielen danke! ( in the style of Elvis Pressley)

Paul

Danke Frohliche Weihnachten

To read german in an english story. But living in this area of your story i prefare to read more about Kristina and Simon.

Wenn Du Hilfe bei Deinem Deutsch brauchst melde Dich.

This is a well written adult story, with adult emotions and adult interactions. I enjoyed it very much.

I spent 9 yrs in Germany. Dad was USAF. We lived at Ramstein AB for 5 yrs. I enlisted in the AF and did 4 yrs at Zweibruecken AB. The countrys beautiful and the people are very friendly (generally) The food and beer are fantastic.As this story laid out Christmas time is magical. Cold sometimes snowy. This story was outstanding. Romance and feelings. Not just Monkey Fucking. I do hope there are more chapters to this.

4 stars

DragonRider55 USAF Ret

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Great story!

5

Especially liked how smooth the dialogue was.

It's still some time before Christmas, but anyway merry Christmas!! And thanks for this beautiful story.

Wow, thanks a really nice story with a sexy vein running through it.

Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.

This story could go further. Please consider adding chapters.

Your jumping between present and past tense was sehr schlect. (Very bad)

A really nice Christmas story, hope Kristina and Simonmat their life long love.

It has been pointed out by a few readers that I have significant issues changing tenses in my works. I am starting a process of looking for a new editor who can help me address this issue. As I can, I will be correcting and updating my works. This is a slow process so please bear with me. Thank you all for your understanding.

'The Christmas Market ' story was very well written. I particulary liked the ending. 5 ***** Burninglove

very nicely done. looking forward to future chapters

Loved it and didn't notice anything untoward re tenses. Might have been a couple of things but not serious enough to annoy me or to rmember them.

Really liked the way you brought her German / Austrian ancestry and language into it.

Thought sex was a little too early but it is difficult to introduce a suitable time lag into a contest as the stories have to be relatively short.

Well done. 5 stars.

There’s more of you guys on here, too!

I know I’m late on the draw, but it was gorgeous writing. Any tense problems were small enough that they would be easy fixes and, for me at least, were easily overshadowed. Thank you for writing it :)

A very nice story. It reminds me of how I met my wife, though not in such an exotic locale. But having been to Bavaria, the people are real.

It would be worth further exploring Kristina's relationship. Perhaps a trip to Austria?

My first time reading your works; really enjoyed the story! Thanks for writing for us!

I'll be checking out more of your stories.

Sweet ending