All Comments on 'The Christmas Party'

This has some great parts but would read so much better and easier in the 1st person. "I did this and I did that" reads better than "Kyle did this and Kyle did that." Much easier to relate to as well and get into the story...yes, and to stroke to. Admit it, that's why we're all here.

Another good story, but slightly spoiled by careless writing. 'site' instyead of 'sight' etc.

Nice three way some people have all the luck. Thanks for sharing.

Follow on could be Kelly.......

Stopped after 40DD