All Comments on 'The Christmas Party'

Story was good overall, but needed more pain to Jennifer. Although we don't know if she had already done it, it was clear she was going to do it. She treated her husband and marriage badly. 4 stars

Pretty similar feelings to anon below me. Decent, but not enough resolution. Not nearly enough pain shown and not just told for Jennifer. 4*

Your writing sucks ass. Are you 12?

The cheaters suffered and the MC prevailed. All as it should be.

Well and good for social media. This should happen more, cheating bitches and bastards being exposed on social media.

Your writing is so easy to read and I love the way you put a story together. Second read and still 5 stars from Xluckylee

Very good writer.... write more often if you are able.

good old social media for exposing the bitch - she was not the best choice to be demoted to HR

Fun!!!

His wife was the HR director???

Too thin.