All Comments on 'The Chronicles: Notomol Ch. 02'

I love guerrilla warfare. :)

5 Stars.

Thank You so much!!!!

I'm really getting into this story and enjoying it immensely. Great work from you as always. Thank you.

So good Sir . I am hooked again .

Love how you establish their reason to fight, which was what the Izumyrians perpetrated on Dusova: every great quest requires a just cause that stirs the blood to fight--and BOY did we get one! That's a LOT of motivation AND it rallies everyone together eventually.

We don't have much more than first impressions right now, but can't wait to see how adding Senderra helps them: she possesses a major fire in her belly to see justice meted out. Kolasovets still seems too tentative, though, and I don't know how much Motekin can truly help as a kind of guslar.

So far they aren't doing badly, as they felled one Izumyrian rider and hobbled another to tell the tale. You've left the guerrilla war largely up in the air, but I'm really looking forward to another installment soon. 5

You are a fantastic story teller. Thanks KS

I think the Izumyrians have stirred up a lot of trouble for themselves. Looking forward to where this is going.

We already see some of Motekin's less-than-flattering remarks recorded about Kolasovets. That will enrage once discovered.