All Comments on 'The Chronicles: Notomol Ch. 14'

Excellent Story! I'm like a kid waiting to open presents. Keep refreshing several times a day. Just Excellent, One of your best!!! Thanks Again!!!

I wonder what's stalling Notomal from espressing his feelings for Guenna ? I mean whens he finally going to jump her bones ?

You sir are truly a great story teller - thank you

So very good. Thank you.

So look forward to this story!

That was so close to being a tragedy

Quite true yet very sad Notomol had no future with all those fools wishing to only save their precious status quo. You explained the political pitfalls and intrigues very well! It still feels like a defeat of sorts, and you lead this story in a direction far different than any of your others; it is not unlike you bringing the least likeliest candidate to the forefront as such a possibly tenous time with Nafni--but what a great save!

It still feels very strange reading this. Despite that, you piqued my curiosity with this new angle. Can't wait to see how you play it out. 5

Keep em coming! I just know they aren’t all going to live happily,ever after in the boondocks. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

This was very deep, and very intelligently thought out. I have no idea where it's going, and that's a good thing. Love your characters, and love your world.

This has been a great yarn from the get go with many interesting & varied characters. The saintly warrior Notomol is both engaging and frustrating - he is just too good verging on too nice. Of all the characters I connect with Guem is definitely the one.

In my imagination I can see this story going in my possible directions. Considering the politicking around Hvad though and the rival factions at work with their greedy inept leaders I don’t think it will be long before Notomol is called on has to get involved once again & to ultimately find a way to unite various factions of course, with the assistance of the Uplanders. This should pave the way for Guem to step into the role of boss cocky a position she is clearly growing into after each episode.