All Comments on 'The Chronicles of a Court Ch. 03'

Was there really a story here, droned on and on and killed the reader to death. 3 pages of drivel left the reader going and?

This is the third chapter of a truly excellent story, even given the occasional grammatical flaws. However, it will make little sense to the reader as a stand alone story, because it is not that. The previous two must be read before this one. Hopefully, it will not be much longer before the fourth chapter in this story appears.