All Comments on 'The Church Ch. 01'

Hooked and waiting for the next chapters

What a naughty little minx , love her ! I wonder if She’ll clean the organists pipe organ ? Will she have an orgasm from the organists organ ? Will the answers to these questions unlock the mystery when she strokes her fingers over the ivory keys ? This story was sizzling hot ! Makes me wanna sniff the seats of the pews and have her crawl under the pulpit servicing me while I’m sermoning you , I confess !!!

very nice story cant wait for the rest, very well paced not to fast which is good ,

Hot theme, fluid prose and an engaging style.

Sent you a DM too.

Very well done girl!

Very much so . You have done this well. Good to see you hold out on the sex from writers perspective and good to see her want more but not get it. Copulation is the end -its the game in getting there.!

well written and so many stories race to strip the female in 3 lines i am glad to see this has not happened in this case well done ,i look forward to seeing the next part and being set in a church adds to the story, and outside the risk all adds to the story

I hope there will be many other parts of that very sexy story.