All Comments on 'The Circle Ch. 39'

by SteveWallace

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ultimaytum over 8 years ago

Kind of a downer

I've read all your series and have enjoyed them. I think this chapter was unnecessary. All the other chapters are upbeat and this one just takes a severe downturn.

Just my opinion. Keep writing.

Anonymousover 8 years ago

A touch of reality!

Hmm yes a bit of a downer but lends this tale to lots of further telling.

Keep it coming I check daily for the next chapter.

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