by SteveWallace
I love this series but in my opinion it's getting almost too long now. I love your writing and I would love to see a brand new series from you. I look forward to it in the future.
...it is a bit annoying that you flip between 3rd person and 1st person. "We were just the TV personalities..."
"He took careful aim with his fist at the side of the man's head, and threw a roundhouse upper cut"
As with the rest of the story, you exhibit a totally superficial knowledge of everything you write about.