All Comments on 'The Circle Ch. 46'

by SteveWallace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love the series but....

I love this series but in my opinion it's getting almost too long now. I love your writing and I would love to see a brand new series from you. I look forward to it in the future.

dozendozenabout 8 years ago
Love your story but...

...it is a bit annoying that you flip between 3rd person and 1st person. "We were just the TV personalities..."

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

"He took careful aim with his fist at the side of the man's head, and threw a roundhouse upper cut"

As with the rest of the story, you exhibit a totally superficial knowledge of everything you write about.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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