All Comments on 'The Circle of Life'

It’s rare that I see such a level of growth in the characters in Literotica.

Good writing!

Very bad..

First she cheats in school when they were together.

Then gets pregnant.

And mark guy is also stupid.

If he wants allie then he could have told her to put the baby for adoption.

But to accept the baby..

Both are shit people.

Sarah should have gotten to know her biological father. She deserved that.

I was surprised by this one, hall pass stories usualy tear at the heart strings begging for destruction. However told from Allie’s perspective and the Karl baby factor it kind of worked for me.

I did kind of feel that Mark was perhaps a little effeminate in parts of the story. But overall I enjoyed it.

For a change I couldn't predict the ending. Most of the stuff here follows a formula, but this was different. People seemed more realistic in this tale and I enjoyed the mystery of the ending when it finally arrived. 4*

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It was an ok story until she got pregnant. Do you know how long a pregnancy actually lasts? Mark shows up after 9 months and she's still pregnant or at least not very visibly pregnant? No.