All Comments on 'The Circle of Life'

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MusicGuy4FunMusicGuy4Funover 4 years ago
A surprising level of maturity

It’s rare that I see such a level of growth in the characters in Literotica.

Good writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Shit story

Very bad..

First she cheats in school when they were together.

Then gets pregnant.

And mark guy is also stupid.

If he wants allie then he could have told her to put the baby for adoption.

But to accept the baby..

Both are shit people.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 3 years ago

Sarah should have gotten to know her biological father. She deserved that.

other2other1other2other1almost 2 years ago

I was surprised by this one, hall pass stories usualy tear at the heart strings begging for destruction. However told from Allie’s perspective and the Karl baby factor it kind of worked for me.

I did kind of feel that Mark was perhaps a little effeminate in parts of the story. But overall I enjoyed it.

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 1 year ago

For a change I couldn't predict the ending. Most of the stuff here follows a formula, but this was different. People seemed more realistic in this tale and I enjoyed the mystery of the ending when it finally arrived. 4*

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