All Comments on 'The Claiming of Jennifer Kim Ch. 03'

I used five photos as inspiration for this story, and I uploaded them to a photobucket.com account.

Included is a shot of the black mini PVC dress, the pink oriental dress, the lockable stilettos, the S-L-U-T earrings and the slave collar. (All 5 photos are rated PG-13, but probably not safe to view at work)

If you would like to see them, leave a comment here, or use the 'Send instant anonymous feedback to the author.' function above. (Don't forget your email address), and I will send you the url.

- MisterX_714

Damn, this is hot!

You got a hot story going, guy. Based on anything in real life? Yes, send me the link, please.

This is a cut above most stories here, thanks to the thought the author has put into the details of psychological manipulation, so often overlooked. And the story itself is hot as hell.

You are a wicked, wicked man. I can not wait to read more! How do you expect me to sleep after reading that?

That was good. You have an excellent grasp of the psychology of the characters and the story development is great. I love it when your hero changes his plans because of lust. Keep it going.

Your fan base needs another chapter, please!

I first wanted to say that this is starting out great! I can't wait to read more of it.

However, one tiny thing is bothering me.

I believe, you can not get your ears pierced with a hoop. I have never seen nor heard of anything other than a stud being used to pierce an ear. Hoops snag quite easily and would make it very difficult for the ear to heal properly. Also, you are not supposed to change your earrings for several weeks, to insure everything has healed. So... I found that bit about the two new pairs of earring (which she was supposed to begin interchanging immediately) seemed very unrealistic to me.

did you really destroy some girls life i mean this is not a fiction you have in reality destroyed a girl just because she is asian and you hate asians

Engaging, but not realistic, and, while submissive, I never responded well to attempts to humiliate me.