by MisterX_714
Not a chapter goes by that I don't wonder just how much is fact and how much is fiction. Great job!
Ahhhh, Jennifer, you are a dream, if only I could be in the running to claim you.
your way of writing is excellent!! the perfection of the humiliation is uncanny!! there's not one thing wrong with the story..
please write them more often if you can!
I usually don't read multi-chapter stories on literotica, as I find them to often be a bit boring. This series on Jennifer Kim is incredible though. Keep 'em coming!
It's a thrill to see Dave back in charge and Jennifer back under pressure.
This whole series is great. Don't listen to any complaints about your slow pace, keep going just as you have been. And if you stop writing I will hate your guts.
The series is great and I keep looking for an update. Please keep going!
You've achieved what few do on this site, in creating something completely satisfying, and a story that manages to be sexy as hell without neglecting the story itself. I feel it needs to be nearing some further character developments, building to what I'm sure will be a well-written and complete conclusion.
Keep it up man
Great so far! The Speed is just fine but, I don't think you have to clarify so much.
Looking forward to more.
I am really enjoying this entire series, particularly the psychology of the two main characters. Please keep the installments coming!
Very hot, wonderfully dirty and so damm sexy. Thank you. Its a very good series, love the characters. Would be ecstatic to read more about them. So interesting and insightful, submission and the conflict it creates !!