All Comments on 'The Closet Ch. 01'

Great story for a start! Hopefully, it will spur, at least, a sequel, or two. In fact, it very well could be a series! You have so many directions to go, whether you bring in "hubby", or not. Either way, keep writing and I'll keep reading.

If "I found myself experiencing urges I had never had before" then why '"Yes, I have. A lot, but I never thought..."' with respect to whether she had fantasized ? If you fantasize about something then you have an urge about it to at least some degree -- it might not be something you want to do in practice, but the urge was there before.

I myself have fantasized about plenty of things without experiencing the urge to actually do them in real life with real people. The difference between fantasy during sexual experiences & reality is clear to me. Sometimes people don't realize they actually want it to be more than a fantasy while other fantasies are strictly that. And nothing more. That is what I meant to convey. Thanks for the feedback.

As a cat lover myself, the greeting by the cat was all it took for me to like this story a lot. The lovemaking seemed a bit hurried, but then again they'd been building up to this for a long time.

I was a little confused when Sherri the narrator mentioned (during a drunken conversation) that she was a lesbian, and then says this lovemaking with Lisa is her first time with a woman. Lesbians take their orientation very seriously and I've had some discussions -- some friendly, some not so friendly -- with women who have been in bad marriages to men through no fault of the man, just that they ARE lesbian and cannot enjoy sex with him or, in some cases, even tolerate it. You might want to handle Chris's surprise arrival on the scene VERY carefully, before you dig yourself into a hole that will alienate the GL community. If Sherri is actually bi and would enjoy sex with a man if he is a good man, you need to talk about that for the next chapter.

Rooting for you and good luck!

Loved this story hope there is more to come. Thanks for sharing

I want to say thank you to all who have submitted feedback, public comments or via email, I appreciate it all!

To Captain Midnight, I'd like to say that no matter what I write it's a story, never meant to offend anybody, and if it does, it wasn't my intention. If people don't like what I write that's their opinion, and I hope people aren't expecting me to follow their "rules", or tread lightly, or worry about offending them. I write. I enjoy it and I hope others do. I guess I don't want people to forget that this is a story, and it doesn't have to conform. Of course I want people to enjoy my writing, but I also don't want to write to please. Or constantly worry about offending people. Make sense? I appreciate ALL the feedback I get and I hope people continue to share it. Thanks Captain ;-)

Thank you a thousand times, thank you, every one!

VoyeuristicMinx