All Comments on 'The Club'

love it...what a way to unwind...hope you continue this story.

It should have been in the "Boring" category.

Nearly 3 pages and no sex? Hey, Literotica is NOT labeled PG-13. You can, and should, have some hot sex in each and every story. In 3 pages, you should have LOTS of hot sex. Yet you had none. "This boy kissed that girl in the van's backseat" does not count.

Boring!

At least, at the end, you had the girls spanking the boys, which is the way it should be.

I'm sure you can do better.

good start to what I know well be one of you best in a long line of fascinating stories. Thank you, Dave

Awesome story! I'm looking forward to reading the rest. Big fan of your stories!I've never been disappointed!

Thank you!

This is a very enjoyable story and well written. My only complaint is where is the part where the girls get initiated. Feels like you left us up in the air.