All Comments on 'The Club of Fools Ch. 04'

I think this is the best part until now! I really enjoy your story and I thankfull that there are stories like this on this site. Offcourse it is extreme, but it is a fantasy, and I really like to read this kind of fantasy. Please write more of this story! Do you have already idea's about the next chapters? If you are out of inspiration (which I guess is not the case) than I would love to help you with it! Take care.

Yes it is extreme, and I've gotten a lot of flack for that (deleted comments unseen). But it's just a story and really not even a fantasy (but it is for some); I just enjoy telling stories. My mother always used to say, "Why spoil a good story with the truth?" I mean, who watches a film where everything is happy and normal? Boring. And don't worry, I have many directions to go with this one, but I decide as I go.

It's really, really interesting how some people have knocked me with this one. Maybe they wouldn't like Alfred Hitchcock either, or Stephen King. Shrug.

Extreme and ball curling in places, but very well written which counts a lot for me.

Not my subject matter either but compelling none the less.

QUOTE: And I see that from the first couple of chapter 1/2 the readership has decided it's time to go. That makes sense. UNQUOTE

Yes, only intelligent people remain. And that's the way I like it.