by BID_erotica
I read it. I love cheating stories, love cuck stories. More gay ones myself but my favorite one on here is a St8 one.
It felt lacking. You have to elaborate on the Alex part more, maybe some build up. You humiliating a character that you made incompetent thus it isn't hot. If you'd spent some time building him up, making him cocky the turn to cuck can be hot. Your whoring out a cheerleader who is already a whore. It's hotter when there is character transformation.
Just my 2 cent. Keep at it though, so few good cheating/cuck stories on here.