All Comments on 'The Coach'

by BID_erotica

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Bham487Bham4879 months ago

Such a disgusting story. Hopefully he gets fired.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I read it. I love cheating stories, love cuck stories. More gay ones myself but my favorite one on here is a St8 one.

It felt lacking. You have to elaborate on the Alex part more, maybe some build up. You humiliating a character that you made incompetent thus it isn't hot. If you'd spent some time building him up, making him cocky the turn to cuck can be hot. Your whoring out a cheerleader who is already a whore. It's hotter when there is character transformation.

Just my 2 cent. Keep at it though, so few good cheating/cuck stories on here.

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