All Comments on 'The Coach's Submission Pt. 01'

This was a great start. I can't wait to see how Alex makes her Coach her bitch.

This was an amazingly hot start to a story with so much potential. Please don't keep us waiting tong for the next chapter.

It's too late, Carol is already Alex's bitch and slut.

can't wait to see what Alex demands of her coach

Really hot start. Well written, good (believable) characters and such a great idea for a story. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for Ch. 2. Hopefully Alex will be taking further control of her naughty slut coach.

I, like many others, eagerly await the rest of the book. Please, please keep writing.

enjoyed part 1. Can't wait to watch as Coach Carol go deeper in submission, as Ms Alex takes control

Love it!!! Please, please continue the Domination of Coach! She obviously NEEDS it!!!

Alex shows Carol, that she isn't the only female Alex "owns" iñ the school

What a lovely story! I loved it. I’m excited for part 2 now!

I absolutely loved your story. I love reading about lesbian sex. The great part was the young girl seducing the older woman. Usually the other way around. I'm going to read part 2 right now. I'm horny now, part 2 should take me over the edge.

Very well written!

Nice story