All Comments on 'The Code Pt. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow, the situation is very intense and stimulating.

And very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Disappointing chapter. Into it or not, anyone in his situation would have said "fuck it, I'm out". Doesn't mean it would stay that way, but no one would have jumped on the bed and taken a fucking, on camera, to add to their problems. It would have been more likely he would leave the house and go somewhere. The problem isn't his, it's the code's. It's fucked up the way they just blew him off. I would have been pissed, then visit the sister to tell her what a fucking cunt she is. He's her brother, he doesn't give a shit who she is or what she believes in. It's a good story, but seems like the writer missed the emotion of the incident.

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