All Comments on 'The Coffee Shop'

Keep on writing and don't listen to the idiots that leave useless comments and do not even have the guts to leave their names. I get that a lot myself.

Great story!

<p>I guess the story wasn't too badly written. But the first paragraph made it clear that the writer wishes she weren't married. Why then is she married?</p> <p> This is really a not very original erotic coupling story that was placed in the loving wives section to make it more controversial. Even in a different genre it would have left me cold. There was just no suspense, no build up. She essentially went up to the first guy she found the least bit appealing and said, "Hey, wanna fuck?"</p>

<p>To me, that's not a story. Why bother with several paragraphs of introduction. Just start with the fuck scene and then end it.</p><p>It occurs to me that the author (authoress?) is very young. I recommend an editor for her next attempt. I suggest she start with a plot and work backwards to the sex scenes. This was more like a letter to Penthouse (but not of Penthouse quality) than an actual story.</p>

That alone merits a 00. Welcome aboard. I don't know what you expected but the way to anger the natives is to delete comments of a negative nature.<P>

It says you have value and they don't which adds up to you having little or no value and the scores will record that - well except for the weirdo's like the mrs.canyon absurdity who whore out his wife [see bio] for porno films and is proud of it. How special is he. Talk about Mars.<P>

Back to you writer - not a bad effort but again why on your first story would you intentionally piss off you customer readers?<P>

Doesn't make much sense does it. You are here to write for them or you wouldn't publish here then you alienate who you write for - puzzling isn't it.<P>

Think about it - before you delete this - or not.

I would gladly respond to anonymous comments, such as the 1 that I will leave on here so that people can see why I am adding a comment to my own story.

As it says in my bio, I am deleting anonymous comments, good or bad, so the ones I have deleted are both good and bad, some rated the story 75 or 100... however, if people are to afraid to leave their name, after I went through putting my story up for you, then why should I read your comment? or why should other people have to read stuff like

"You are mentally ill, get help" - Anonymous

or "good story!" - anonymous

those comments do equally nothing for anyone and whoever wrote it is obviously afraid to talk to me about the story, so i wont let them

Have you considered that maybe people post with an anonymous ID because they do NOT want to open an account? I don't. If it is a requirement of Literotica to open an account before you can critique a story, could you kindly show me the link or the area where these instructions are specified? Now I feel like an unwanted child just because I do not have an ID. I am not a coward nor am I abusive with my comments. I respect authors and appreciate their generosity in providing entertainment for readers, but that doesn't mean that I will open an account when I do NOT want to have one.

Author, I am sorry you feel this way. I will respectfully avoid your stories, following your instructions because I will remain anonymous. That is my wish and my right.

I know that you are going to delete this comment, I just wanted to let you know that not everyone that signs anonymous does it because they are a coward. They just don't have the interest in opening an account. And when you take into consideration that at least 80% or more of the readers are anonymous, you are throwing away most of the readers.

Good luck, and good writing!

I'm not an author, I'm just a lonely reader. BUT I agree totally with (An anonymous perspective), although I have an account for several years. Sometimes I don't sign my name, if I'm just leaving a short comment, and I'm damned sure not a coward. BTW the story has potential, I too can't understand why she stays married when she HATES being married so much.

Decent enough stroke story, I suppose, but has little of literary value.

Its a great story, original or not. Reality is hardly original anyway and if people don't like it tell them to go read sci fi instead

For a woman, please don't be married, do you both a favor and tell your husband you want a divorce and why. When he finds a woman who loves him and does want to be married to just him he will thank you. Waste of talent, try again.

And the fucking is fairly vanilla, for a guy who's reportedly in the nines! OK read.

3*

This oblivious whore only tried one story, and that was one too many.