All Comments on 'The Collaring of Chloe Ch. 42'

I am at a loss for words. This story has been one of the best and most satisfying works of art I have ever read. Thank you for dedicating your time, energy, and effort to delivering us this masterpiece. I'm eagerly awaiting book 2!

Thank you very much! I am so glad that it has been enjoyed so much. It still amazes me how much people have praised this book, especially in light of the fact that it wasn't originally meant to even be a full novel. It seems mind-blowing to be able to say that I have managed to write a full novel now and I feel so proud to have done it, ten times more proud that I managed to create something people have liked.

I am honored to have my writing referred to as 'art' and it helps me believe that this book has been as special to others as it has to me. Knowing that people have found so much joy and meaning in it has made every ounce of effort and all the time I've invested so worth it, no matter where else the story may go in the future.

I plan to try and get a few chapters further in my other book before I begin writing Book 2, but it shouldn't be long before these wonderful characters return. :)

First off, a great story. I had started this a while ago but never finished for some reason. So in the last few days I read the whole thing again. I have a hard time envisioning someone wanting to go that far into modern consensual slavery with no safeguards about who "owns" you besides hoping your old master picks a new good one. That's just my opinion not judging.

Like the fact that in the end what Chole wanted (to stay with James n Mittens) she was able to retain though it was cleverly done in the last chapter.

I look forward to the next book with these characters. Like what happens finally with Sally and August?

I loved the way you have Mittens speak. That dialog is hilarious.

5/5

J

Thank you very, very much. And your opinion is quite valid and is actually one that I agree with. What Chloe did was extreme and dangerous. I've tried to really kind of make the subtle point that a lot of people have balked at her doing it, especially Heron, who only went along with it because he knew Chloe would just go to someone else. Chloe's fantasy is meant to be a very extreme (and honestly inadvisable) step with things. She saw it as a way to make her fantasy as 'real' as possible, but one of the underlying themes of the story is learning to recognize that a fantasy doesn't have to be an extreme to still be beautiful and achievable.

The next books is actually centered on Mittens and from her point of view. I actually have a bit of it already written, but have not yet settled on an actual title yet. Once I finally do, there will be 2-3 chapters of the next book put out back to back. If you're a patron of my Patreon, I've actually put up the advance chapters for them to read. There is also a monthly 'Thank you letter' that I make (with pictures) for higher level tiers that Mittens being...well, MIttens, and having fun with the readers. :)

I am very glad you've enjoyed the book and I hope you enjoy the next one. It will be coming soon.

A great erotic novel. The story style is very similar to the Japanese galgame, with the addition of European and American bdsm elements. This is one of the best bdsm novels I've ever read. The most important thing is that it is completely free and has written the final ending!

Hahahaha Well, I am glad I was able to grant you a complete and completely free good read. :)

Thank you for your comments and I am honored by them. I have been very happy with this story and its characters. I hope you enjoy the second book just as much. ;)

Really enjoyed this.

5* every episode, thanks for sharing

Dixon (UK)

I'm glad you enjoyed the novel. :) I put a lot love into it. Hopefully, you're enjoying the second book just as much.

i came into this series purely because the main character and i shared a name, and i can confidently say that this exceeded all expectations i had about the story. all the love and trust displayed through the developing relationships between chloe and her newfound family, the drama chloe encountered and how she, mittens, and master dealt with it, and the journey chloe embarked on to find what she truly wanted out of this lifestyle and how it differed from her initial intentions, it all spoke to me on a deep level that i wasn’t expecting in the slightest, but was welcomed all the same. i’ve never considered myself much of a crier, something i’ve always struggled with, but at multiple points throughout the story i found myself with tears in my eyes at the pure emotion chloe, mittens, and master felt towards each other, and how well they all fit together both in terms of lifestyle dynamics but spiritually as well. as someone currently outside the community with a strong desire for a relationship similar to what chloe initially sought, this really helped put things into perspective and taught me so much about what to expect when i eventually join the lifestyle and what sort of behavior is tolerated and whatnot, including the fact that my fantasy may not be what i ultimately end up seeming out. thank you for writing such a beautiful piece of media that not only portrayed the BDSM community in a positive and healthy light, but also resonated with me on a deeper level that i ever could have anticipated. i have no doubt that i will be returning both to reread this series again and also to check out the sequel series’ as well. i’m sure i could write several pages worth of my loving ravings for this work but i’ll leave it at this for now so i can start the mittens focused story, something for which i am very eager. congratulations on a wonderful work and i look forward to seeing what you create next!!! ~chloe🐱

Chloe, it is responses like this that make all my work on this story so worth every hour I've put into it. Thank you, so very much, for what you have written here. People like yourself is why I wrote this. To show the lifestyle in a way that is positive, helpful, hopeful, and beautiful. Reading what you wrote moved me deeply, knowing that I have helped you with your own views of the lifestyle and shown you something meaningful for your desires to get into it. I wish you all the best experiences with it. It can be a lifestyle of great drama and stress, but can also be a gateway to finding a relationship built on the deepest of trusts.

So many stories of BDSM are extreme fantasies, often written by people who actually have little experience with the real thing. It has been my pleasure to create something that depicts things in a much more realistic and relatable way, allowing people to get to know the lifestyle as it really is. At its core, BDSM is about relationships, people, and shared fantasies, but more than anything, it is about love and trust.

I am glad you've been able to take the journey with my Chloe, getting to dream with her, cry with her, and be loved with her. You are who this story is for. So, thank you for taking a moment to write this to me and let me know that it was received and enjoyed. I hope your fantasies all come to life for you. :)

Hands down one of the best stories on Lit, was so beautifully written from the characters to the environment to just everything in between. Honestly kinda glad I read the two stories backwards, great closure as well and I honestly like that the "smut" scenes weren't graphic and more erotic then anything. Loved seeing how Chloe's trust and relationship developed throughout the whole story with Mittens Master. I could probably say more but will keep it simple. ~Fib -Catgirl enthusiast and Mittens' #1 fan

Thank you very much. I am so very glad you enjoyed it and I hope you continue to enjoy as the books and new chapters go on. I already have developed plans for two more books past Mittens Has Class and don't really intend to stop there. So, you have a lot more of these characters to look forward to. :)

I also notice that you have begun Slave Unbound. It is a very different story, but hopefully you will enjoy it just as much. ;)

It's interesting to say the least, already on ch 3 but will probably take it slower this time. I'm excited to see what else you write!