All Comments on 'The Collector'

Good story!

5

Meh

Another great story, JB! Very enjoyable! Five stars!

JB once again you have hit the ball out of the park. Well done

another great read, thank you!

The ending could have been a bit longer

Looking forward to Judy, Tom, Melissa and Svante posing nude sexually to be painted by James York for a new series for the collector.

Judy meets with the collector final series and she actually falls in love with him.

Fun short story - but can’t help wonder what happened with JP. Perhaps a part two where Alexis is out of the picture after finding out about Martin and Judy’s little trust, and Judy now has to work out her new world with Melissa and Tom vs her old desires with Martin?

Also - can’t help but think if Melissa has slept with James York in the past, and isn’t a possessive lover where she’s able to swap in with Tom and Judy...why she’d turn down the gig and recruit Judy in the first place?

Nevertheless, gave this 5 stars. Thanks!