by ZotDragon
I too have enjoyed "Mothers' Milk" from my girlfriend's breasts after approximatly six months of everyday attention to them. They were 34B but have developed with time to a pair of 34D. Please continue this storyline for a few mor e chapters. ;-)
to a point. Two of them freely have sex with others multiplying all of their risk of STDs and AIDS. Now the two girls are in love but he is only into fetish with one of the girls. I cant see this romance lasting past the sememster end if that long. Eventually the two milkmaids will live together and Kelly will fuck the guys Helen brings home. Do you think any of them will be disease free in two years?
After the begin a little too much focused on intimate scenes. I still like the way you develope the plot, although it's never a really turning into deep conflict and therfor more wishfulfillment than dramatic story. Good point also: the dialogues. Apparently this is a very big issue to many authors, so they leave tis part often away - which of course doesn't work. But still, I got a little bored in the end, because imho it's not so much the description of the intimate scenes that cause the main interest, but the storyline and characters. And in the end, they all somehow seemd to live only in their bedroom.
I'm having a little trouble understanding why I liked this story. I guess maybe it was a good portrayal of intimacy and contentment. I think I "get" Kelley, and to the extent that Helen is the new character, her as well. In the end, Simon and Kelley are the fetish couple, so I was able to presume that Simon was a little deeper than you portrayed him. If not for that, I didn't "get" Simon.
I hadn't fully realized it before but I think lactation is a fetish of mine. Keep the stories coming.
These stories you have are great. They're fun to read and they are very well written (with the exception of the occasional, forgivable spelling and grammar mistakes). And the ending for this one was kinda heart warming that Simon truly loved Kelly enough to stay with her in lou of Helen's milk.
Love this series. More installments please?! Does Simon finally suckle from Helen? Does Helen give up the others? How does Kelly react, now that Helen is lactating?
As a polyamorous bisexual woman with a pregnancy/lactation fetish, I really enjoyed this story. Thanks :P