All Comments on 'The Color of Air'

I really liked your story. I liked that you gave just enough information to let my minds imagination fill in the rest. I am curious to see if you will continue this as a series. Also your story fills me with many questions. Such as if she gains enough mass will she be able to divide her body into two seperate bodies, and if so could she send a part of her to that body ( namely Sam). So that she could have a companion. Lots of other possibilities drift in my head. Sorry to ramble like that. I hope you continue writting as i enjoyed your work.

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That wasn't just good porn, that was a great story you told there. I'll have to read more of your work!

You have surprised me with this gem and opened my eyes also. I had no idea that a story like this was possible. Thank you

Absolutely wonderful.

poetry.

Thanks much......

Highly imaginative and very well written. Awesome use of sensory description and a great read to boot.