All Comments on 'The Color of Blood - Book 01 Ch. 02'

There are stories that are written to arouse sexual response immediately and there are stories that build up to it slowly like great foreplay. I'm enjoying the build up of the characters. Hope that the 5 friends get more depth and looking forward to what Tristan adds to the group dynamics. What are you going to do with those dreams?

I'm interested in the characters and in whatever is going to happen to them. Don't worry about the sex. It's a story first, sex is just a bonus. Keep making it character and plot driven. We will still enjoy it whenever the sex comes around. Looking forward to more from you!

really enjoyed the story so far the length was an issue for me though you dont need to send parts if thier that short wait some more and send a longer one next time that being considered still a great story so far really excited for the next part

I am enjoying your story very much, it flows so well the only grump I have is before I know it I'm at the end of the chapter. Looking forward to reading more about your lassie's adventures.

You are developing your characters at a very nice pace. My only complaint would be the length of your story. I honestly wish each page of this story were alittle longer. That is why I'm going on to chapter 3 right now. I want more of the story now!