All Comments on 'The Colour of Love'

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AlinaXAlinaXover 7 years agoAuthor

Nothing? What nothing? I accept that it's weird, but most sci-fi and most erotica is weird, so why should this merit an 'UGH'?

Fair enough if you don't like it, but some explanation for the 'Nothing' would be nice...

bforobforoover 7 years ago
Disregard the previous bloke

This story gave me the shivers. Nicely done.

AlinaXAlinaXover 7 years agoAuthor

Good shivers, I hope...

Glad you enjoyed, & thanks for the comment.

Merry Christmas!

Simonsayz13Simonsayz13almost 7 years ago
Wonderful story

Very much enjoyed this story. Has me thinking of several others like it that I have enjoyed immensely in the past. Thank you for sharing with us!

Simon

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 7 years agoAuthor

I'm happy to hear that. This is a favourite of mine.

Thanks for reading & commenting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
I 'come' a little later but ...

This story fascinated me!

I love this lively and very differentiated language and the story of a woman who gets to know herself 'completely new' (as always in good erotic? :)

Terrific and "Thank you, Alina!" : -)

AlinaXAlinaXabout 3 years agoAuthor

Never too late... and I still love this story. Thanks for reading & enjoying!

jalford764jalford764over 2 years ago

I live stories like this. Wish you made more

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

You *live* stories like this? I'm jealous!

jalford764jalford764over 2 years ago

Autocorrect is an annoying adversary

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

Autocorrect is a dominatrix with an electrifying whip...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

how does this species reproduce i hope by dividing after finding a volunteer

AlinaXAlinaXabout 2 years agoAuthor

Your guess is as good as mine.

tastethewinetastethewine17 days ago

The conceit of the story so inventive and takes the reader through several stages of change and levels of meaning. So thoroughly that, for instance, we have now Three Cocks thrusting, battering, and slamming in the expected payload of smut imagery. Brilliant!

AlinaXAlinaX17 days agoAuthor

Best of all, there's no mess after...

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I like writing stories that are erotic without sacrificing plot and character. I like pushing consensual boundaries. I like novelty and I like perversity... Anyone wishing to do audio versions of my stories is welcome to do so - but please acknowledge the source and send me a...