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by astroboysandeep

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trippyfibretrippyfibrealmost 2 years ago

omg. this is extra good. i can almost feel what you wrote. ❤️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I liked it all the way till the end. YOU HAVE GOT TO MAKE A PART TWO TO THIS STORY!! If there isn't, well, I'm going to die! Amazing story, 4 out of 5 for the ending. I'll change it if there is a part two... if there is a part two, then I'd rate it a 10 out of 5 stars if I could.

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I try to write stories that are a mix of fantasy and speculation. Curiosity about people, places, lives, histories and futures is what leads me. For me, writing is both a creative outlet and a vent. If you like my stories, we are kindred spirits. Come say hi: https://twitte...