All Comments on 'The Company Party Pt. 02'

by Prince020402

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ju8streadingju8streadingover 6 years ago

she just opened their marriage up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Congratulations! You made a sequel that sucked sucked worse thsn the first...

And that is a hell of an accomplishment considering the first chapter was putrescence incarbate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well

at least hubby got something out of the deal. The overheard conversations were interesting up till the overboard sex. Hopefully Holly will have some remorse and offer to make it up to hubby. Maybe they can salvage this situation and become stronger for it. I appreciate twists in a story, it keep the story from being boring. Thanks for writing a strong husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
She didn't open it

She ended it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
As expectet

This became a pile of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
NO

You forgot disease, stds, morals, cheating whore,cuck shit,needs a editor,

Kill yourself, should be in fetish.This is a good hot wife story,just ignore the moron comments.Mine included.All five stars here

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
trash...

the only thing i could think of when i read your story... trash... please stop

cindylynn34cindylynn34over 6 years ago

Keep going.. We will keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
crap

just crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A loyal mother turns into a college slut as written by this chuck author

Now how did she think this would go down ,as her husband would have found out threw the grapwine. Even though he witnessed it. A chuck crappy sex story. If he divorced her she has the kids and the house and alimony .till they turn 18, but seeing he is enjoying this deceit to some extent the author continues with this garbage story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome!

I still can’t figure out why the haters read stories they know they won’t like, and then complain. Stupid! Keep writing, like the other person said, and we’ll keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very hot

Most business people have been to a company party where women got fucked. I liked the voyeurism; having my husband watch me sucking and fucking a strange cock would be extremely hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
VERY GOOD !!

Ejoyable story line and like the writing style.

MbgdallasMbgdallasover 6 years ago
Hated it.

The smoking just killed it for me. Would have been OK if he had flipped out about it.

Now also didntncare for the husbands reaction to a cheating wife. She just gave away what was his. It will be interesting to see what he does now. I would leave her at the party since her pussy is soiled, her surprise is soiled, and her mouth is soiled. Bet she comes home and gives him sloppy seconds and he loves it.

Totally unrealistic. An marriage of 18 years with a faithful wife... a wife doesn’t just do that and the husband certainly doesn’t react that way.

Too bad because I really think this author has some writing talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Waste of time. 1* for this crap

The writer must be a freaking retard to write something so stupid and pathetic.

In fact the writer seems to enjoy more about cocks and loads of cum rather than his STD cunt wife......so the writer has some repressed and frustrated gay issues that were transported to this wimp story.

1* for this nonsense, crap and poor written story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You Have To Wonder...

You have to wonder why these anonymous people bother reading erotica that is categorized as “Loving Wives” if they are going to react so caustically every time. Maybe they just get off projecting their anger at every Loving Wives author they read. It is fantasy guys! Your wives likely cheated on or left you for good reasons. As for the story, both my wife and I thought it was hot. Naughty ... yes. But that is WHY we read erotica. We want naughty. We will read part three another day, as we are both in pleasant “afterglow” now. 😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Writers: Please, Take Note

You can take the time to mention Tom, Al, Holly, and Glenda by name. You can even mention Don who has nothing to do with this chapter; but you couldn't have Glenda address Holly's husband not one single time on the entire last page of this chapter. If you mentioned his name since page one, chapter 1, I missed it. You are not the only one. Only the best of the best remember to correct this oversight.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
At This Point

At this point Holly has ruined her unnamed husband's career. Husband's coworker Thomas and husband's boss Max has blackmail material on the unnamed husband. It is bad enough that Glenda and her asshole husband Al know juicy little sexual bits about Mrs. M. But now the biggest asshole in the company, the boss Max, can black-mail unnamed husband and when the shit hits the fan, hubby will be held accountable. And Holly will be the one to blame. Well, Mr. Anonymous did send her alone to the party without her panties. So, he can't really protest. And any husband who does this deserves to lose her and his marriage.

Pappy7Pappy7about 5 years ago
Wonder if Holly was

counting her husband as one of the women she had had sex with?

mrocmrocabout 4 years ago
Loved it!

Great follow up to chapter 1 and now looking forward to chapter 3. We've never gone this far before, but it does get really exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sharing

Whewwwww.....so much going on.....just was talking to my wife in another country and talking about her on social media. I have told her that she is free to do as she pleases on Facebook and Whatsapp and hinted about the time she sent me naked pics of herself and after she had phoned me, told me to take off my pants and proceeded to have phone sex with me....Now I hope she takes the hint and does it with other guys....such a turn on....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story - well written with empathy. Not everyone’s “cup of tea” but author has the right to set the story. Maybe the anonymous commenters should try writing instead of vitriol.

SarahwithloveSarahwithlovealmost 2 years ago

No way any husband could be ok with what is happening. This is silly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good thing sissy hubby got a blow job since he'll be giving Thomas one soon enough!

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegler10 months ago

Epic tale. My wife had plenty of lovers before me, we met when she was 42 and me at 43. She had at least 63! I share your smoking fetish, my wife has been indulging me lately, we're not hardcore smokers, we exercise, eat well, I guess it's just a part of sensual routine for us. I love kissing her after she smokes, it turns me on. She let me fuck her from behind the other day, my birthday, as she smoked a cigarette, hand rolled, we like quality tobacco, lol. it was sexy as hell. I tied my cock with a leather thong, it got crazy fat and wild looking. she leaned up against our house, outside, we only smoke in fresh air, lol, it was very sexy. she says she wants to do it again. anyway, we share some similar kinks and similar wives, my wife got a scholarship to arizona state as a high jumper, she's got the same legs! and boy, a strong love canal! cheers, great story, i really enjoyed it. and thanks for the follow! hit me up if you ever want to compare notes, the huge sexual past is both a turn on and sometimes gets me feeling strange, but I dig it, my past is pretty prolific too, just seems different for a woman. for my next life i'm coming back as a super hot, very intelligent, confident woman! it's gotta be wild!! for this one I'll continue enjoying being a man! take care... Shaglus

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We are a couple - a former slut that likes to revisit that side on occasion (either in story telling or real experiences) and a wonderful husband that encourages it.

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