All Comments on 'The Complete Package'

Not sure about this one.

Excellent story. A story of ultimate confidence on both sides. Can't wait to read more. 5 stars

The sex scene needed work. It lacked the intimate descriptions other parts of the story had.

Some misspellings and tense problems.

Good so far...Five Stars!

Too aristocratic for my taste. Had to bail out after the fight like a pilot from an underperforming plane. Sorry, but the sample of UK writing is a tad distracting.

smh...boring and ridiculous at the same time??!!...this is the first "bad" post I have ever left...just sayin