All Comments on 'The Concubinage of Mr. Greist Pt. 01'

this story just draged on, i found myself skipping over paragraphs , just rambled on

I admit, I really wasn't prepared for this story was. But as I read it, it felt repetitive. After the MC mentioned that he knew he was acting like a douche for the third time, I was like "Okay, I get it!"

You don't need to spell out that the MC is a good guy with a black heart. Let the story do that. Also, depending on how this goes, you might want to consider listing this under Non-Con/Reluctance, with a author's note about any mm, mfm, or mmf content. I would consider subterfuge and coercion to be a part of that category.

This story didn’t turn out to be what I thought it was going to be going by the title and description. However, putting that aside, what did I think of the story itself? Not very much, unfortunately, and definitely average. I found it difficult to convince myself it was worth a 3. If you do continue with this as a series I would suggest you seriously consider how you can put in better content.

Master .... Curtsey ....... Real man like you Master are important for submissive sissys ...... Your description in this chapter about a sissys being is perfect Sir ..... Yes total submissive graves dominance loves being roughly handled humiliiated and abused sexual, breeding is priority ..... A chastity cage should be used from early days 24/7 this is the lifeline to sissys master and so with regular canings the sissy becomes kind of a brainles fuckdoll

Thank you Master