All Comments on 'The Concubine Story'

Hi. A fan of the Bodge series

Good one.

could become very interesting

Hope there are further installments of this tale. Thank you for your efforts THodge

You write well. This is a very interesting start. I hope you will continue the strory.

Nice start. Could be a very interesting series :) Thank you for your work

An interesting start.

Good beginning

Hi! Interesting story. Continue, please.

Definitely potential here. Thank you!

Please continue

Good. Story

Loved the story, for the background of a new character. Thank you.

Good

Hi,

I like the potential of errant concubine fitted out as a war machine being left as a tease for the next episode,

Every man would love to have the concubine you manufacture.

A very interesting story so far. I can't wait to read what happens next,

Well done. Hoping for more from you, and perhaps more to this story?

Great recruitments drive for Tim

Interesting.

Hi, very interesting.

Great! Can you make one for me?!!

“Hi” thodge1945. A somewhat confusing short story until the ending which I guess explains that this is somewhat of a backstory/bio of a character. If this is correct then I like it. It is new and doesn’t interrupt the flow of the main story. If I am wrong then I have proven myself an imbecile and hopefully I shall also be assassinated within 6 weeks.

J.D.

To all that answered questions about does anyone read my story. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. It makes me feel good to hear from you.

Thank You

Terry

OK this is no story. It's the begin of a story, now you can write what happens to Shanae

To tell her adventures. But for a beginner it's OK

Hi, looking forward to the next part, Thanks

i have been following your stories for a quite a while and enjoy them.

Keep writing, good stories.

i have been following your stories for a quite a while and enjoy them. HI

Great piece, Yes we are reading and waiting for the next episode

loved it

Hi.

enjoyed the background story, It helped to give some understanding to the laatest addition to Tim;s crew and to his life. I have read every chapter in this saga and look forward to each new one as you publish it. Keep up the excellent work.

Nice background on Shanae, makes her introduction into Tim's adventure easier to blend in

Yes it is being read. Thank you

Hi.

I like!

Leonardo and DR Easton are good characters. In addition to Shanae they could be occasional story lines within Tim's adventures.

Thank you it was good to see the background on Shanae.

Could you please write one with the background d of Risfi in it?

Thank you.

Robert

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