All Comments on 'The Concubine's Apprentice Ch. 01'

want much more of these two sweet ladies and their adventures

What a captivating story, beautifully written. I had to memorize a line in the song because I loved it "Hush your words, for words are hallow, silence brings its own release." I look forward to reading the next part

very enjoyable story -- imaginative -- but now it's time to continue, and there's certainly plenty to be said, eh?

This is a truly awesome intro. into what could be a phenomenonal story.

Congratulations.

Hugs'N'Stuff

David