All Comments on 'The Confessions of Cherry Duncan Ch. 01'

by BlondieBuxom

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tonydxxtonydxxover 2 years ago

I'm utterly confused by the geography. Cherry was at a school in Liverpool and "couldn't wait to see her parents in England", so she's on a ship bound for London (from where?). But she says she's headed for "Rhode Island, England" which doesn't exist.

BlondieBuxomBlondieBuxomover 2 years agoAuthor

Oh, my God. I’m so sorry about that! I am really bad at geography. I had to edit the story a lot for publishing purposes so some of it got mixed up. As for the Rhode Island thing, I got confused. Thank you for pointing this out so I don’t make this mistake again!

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