All Comments on 'The Connoisseur Ch. 01'

Too long a "lead in" without any "follow-through"

More please… more

Love the build up and suspense. It was wonderful and the pace was great. I liked the ending, it was perfect.

Want the rest

When is the next part coming

Can’t wait for more. Excellent storytelling.

Six new chapters have been uploaded!

Your brass key turned to iron?

Can't wait to read the rest. Excellent writing. Love it. xx

“ a natural submissive, rare as a miracle and more precious than a mountain of red diamond.”

Wouldn’t it be more fun to say “ a natural submissive, common as sand, but once discovered and trained, more precious than a mountain of red diamonds.”

This is exceptionally well written unfortunately it went from highly erotic to a complete and utter turn off with that last line. Fingers crossed that it’s just a hiccup.

Utterly laughable “erotica”, with some passages of it hysterically funny!