All Comments on 'The Connoisseur Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A very erotic fantasy, no more no less. That’s the only way that this is erotic because it’s not real.

Particularly considering that the reality of this sounds exactly like human trafficking, people should never be viewed as disposable. With regards to the lead character, it’s a shame he sold out his dominant tendencies to become a monster.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Luminous_ButterflyLuminous_Butterflyover 2 years ago

Very enjoyable. Your explanations of how things ought to be done are delicious and delightfully erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

True stories are often boring. Most of us come here for erotic fantasy, and you have elevated it to an art. Your writing is superb and your pace as slow as good foreplay should be. Ignore the trolls and keep teasing your appreciative readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well fuck..I had really high hopes for this story but it’s turned out to be just another psycho kidnapping women WHY would you think this qualifies as BDSM?? It’s insulting, it’s NOT BDSM, kidnapping and slavery just isn’t sexy not unless it’s part of a CNC scene. You have a very disturbing idea of what constitutes BDSM. This is just another fantasy story about sick rapist, a really poor excuse for a Dom. No wonder vanilla folks think we’re all dangerous freaks, this prick is even worse than Christian Grey.

If you write a story with genuine BDSM I’ll happily read it, until then I’m out. Real slavery isn’t sexy.

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