All Comments on 'The Conquering of Queen Mara'

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LitCritLitCrit2 months ago

Meh. Conqueror wins a beautiful prize and proceeds to roll it in the mud, give it to the pigs to play with, and make all of its once tight portals worn out and sloppy. Stupid conqueror! And please, clean up your terminology. Mara is NOT a whore. Whores get paid. They make their living selling sexual favors. Mara is a victim, she may be acting like a slut, or she may be acting like a survivor, but she is not a whore.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Can you introduce another female? A maid perhaps? Maybe make Mara jealous?

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