All Comments on 'The Conquest of Stephen Perkins Ch. 01'

Oh more , more please , have loved all of it so far please do continue.💋

oh please more and more

oh please type more.. i want to be him

There's nothing wrong with the writing....Just hate hypnosis. Don't trust it, don't like it, despite having it recommended. Creepy

Well, that was truly a teasing little morsel.

Your well written story has begun what promises to be a wonderfully exciting adventure for the fortunate reader to enjoy! You have my undivided attention. Please continue along!

Theres no more ? Such a awesome approach layout of anticipation and yet we find a level of disappointment lingering in our minds . Why srop now my mind screams and my heart can only hope for more the fulfilment of bliss and happiness it will bring . Give it to me please