by Donna_Lynn_Cooper
Dearest Donna Lynn,
Such a wonderful story, the way Carole is so feminine and falls into Jack's arms and seduces him. So many of us would love to live something like that.
Love
Joanne
XOXOXO
Because they read a great story the whole way through & completely failed to enjoy it (& i suspect they knew they wouldn't) just so they could leave a really dumb comment. Fortunately there seem to be a great deal more people (myself included) who thouroughly enjoyed this story & will be looking forward to the second part of it
I really liked this story. I think you did a great job with the want and need to become Carole with out it being creepy or single white female like. It looks like you have the perfect set up for another chapter or 2, maybe more depending on where you go. I can't wait to see where you take this since it could go to Carole now having a twin to a replacement or where ever else.
To anon, the point that was stressed was that Kevin looked just like Carole, enough so to fool her kids. That along with reasons not disclosed like maybe Jack has a thing for passable CDs or TG's makes your comment seem rather dispensable.
Though I feel sorry for Carole, this was a very sweet and loving story. I love all the feelings and emotions you put into this work. Hug, ~sara
I read this story on fiction mania many times enjoying myself in that special way us sissy girls know and love. I waited for the next chapter even thinking of writing it myself such was my enjoyment of it. Now you have posted it here I do so hope you intend on taking this amazing story onwards. We need to know about the pseudo Carole's next move. Which I hope is to take the place of the real one for good. Do please carry on if only for my sake !
Loved it x
I can't wait to read about Carol losing her virginity. I too am a sissy feminine CD and this story really turned me on. I love sucking cock and getting fucked, especially by married men. They really don't think of me as their gay lover but rather their mistress. I love pleasing them, sucking their cocks, and getting fucked. Being a woman for my hot male lovers is wonderful. Please continue with the next chapter or two. This story was fantastic.
COULD YOU FINISH THIS OR ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER TO IT... IT IS SO HOT, AND I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE FOR SURE...! BETTY jo xoxo
Oh God, please write more! How I wish I were Carole and about to be deflowered. Such a hot story! Excellent writing.
The title tells it all.