All Comments on 'The Construction Workers'

So glad you have taken to posting again hope you have lots more to come

Exquisitely written. Well done. I would liked to read another chapter or two wherein Paula continues to submit to old Sid.

,,,,plot devices to accommodate said change.Talk about not planning out your story.Thankfully I got many chuckles out of the ,latest rants from the anonymous pussies calling everyone else wimps. Pretty funny stuff!

Sorry about the assholes using the old boorish line about the UK. That moron Harold in Va makes me feel ashamed to be American. Pathetic little man.

And yet this 'male' writer writes from the male perspective. Hmmm. I think he or she is confused about their gender.

You have some of the best stories on Literotica. Hope you have more like this one or your other stories.

I will not be reading any more of this shit.

I think it would have been better if he never knew that his wife had cheated on him.

Now everyone of the fellows knows that his wife is a slut and her husband knows it.

Great to have you back. Paula exposing herself for the the old men and giving in to them just drives me crazy. Makes me fee like John. You sure can write. Please, let's have more.

total waste of time

of the child that is growing in her belly

Or maybe closer to Peckinpah's 'Straw Dogs' Salt-of-the-Earth (but earthy) honest craftsmen topping decadent aristocratic Lady! Lust beats breeding (at breeding!)

i loved it n lived it sir

Very erotic Paula allowing all the men to do as they wished to her.

Great story. Very erotic; would love to see more and hear more descriptions about the men. like Sid enjoying her. Well done! Thanks

Loved it, great character development. Would love to read more adventures with John and Paula going forward8

Retarded? loving wife my ass.

Cuck cuck cuck. That was a lame outcome.

Nice writing but what the fuck, was that about!

Damn how many % of the literotica's readers (and writers) are medicated. Hopefully with the wrong prescription, so there could be a small hope of rectifying generation of being in a state of drooling pre-puberty minded drug heads.. Whom seems to like jerking of to the mentally deficient...

Fischer

started interesting continued on to long and then sorta spurtered out.

Great character development of a cheating whore and cuckold pussy.