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I will be looking down, if I can, and watching them. My children will also keep an eye on their father too. They have met Samantha and I think that they like her enough to hope for the best too. John...he is the one that worries me. I only wish I could be certain of the end of this whole thing before I left the world.
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26thNCover 2 years agoI’m surprised at how much I’m enjoying this story. It’s not what I expected at all.
Rancher46about 3 years agoSuch a sad tale, a real tear jerker. Well written with a good storyline 5 stars
tkh3nkey2110over 4 years agoA very tragic story, but heartwarming in a sad way. I love it. Thanks.
cliffhanger20about 11 years agoIt's tragic and so sad but the love that this woman has for her husband almost restores my faith. NOT, what will he do when he finds out the whole thing has been a lie.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoNo excitement at all. Perfunctory sex scene. No transition from husband's protests to his fucking Samantha on the table. One of the most improbable, boring stories I've read here.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoust found out from IMDB that the name of the movie was "The Substitute Wife" made in 1994. Starring Farrah Fawcet and Lea Thompson.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoIt's a nice vehicle for a simple story. It is also a fantasy. I fail to see why someone would have a problem with a fantasy about love, sex, devotion, and death.
Nice work curious2c do us proud with the following sections.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoOkay, I'll concede that this chapter is a little weaker than I would have liked, but to the earlier-posted critics, I say that the premise was well-established, and the story line has followed the premise.
Really, this series falls into the category of "if you don't like the premise, don't read the story". The "Star Wars" movies made George Lucas a very, very, very wealthy man. But there is much about the basic plot line and the developed episodes which defy logic and physics as we understand them. If you don't like the first movie, why would you go see the second?
It's all fiction. It's one thing to criticize the plot as it develops in this third chapter. But if you've read the first and second chapters, don't grouse about the basic plot line. Even if you find it implausible, the story didn't change after the first chapter. If you didn't like it, don't read it!!!
-- KVK
