All Comments on 'The Conveyer Belt Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
More, please

This was quite a strange story but very intriguing. I'm looking forward to part two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
What he hell???

Very Fucked up

Nasty KarlNasty Karlover 15 years ago
Different!

Well Written, Different and NASTY! Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yikes

What drugs were you on when you wrote this?

Not that it's a bad story, it's not bad, but that is one wierd story...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
ha! I love this.

This is hilarious. I just had a dream a couple nights ago about an erotic waterslide for women. It gave backrubs too. I think our brains are on the same wave :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Unique, humorous and creative.

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