All Comments on 'The Corner Table at Mickey's Pt. 02'

Part 2 was great!

5

I look forward to the next instalment

Looking forward to the next chapter. Nice job.

This is fantastic! I can hardly wait to see where things go next!

Great job and anxious for the next segment,

This is a great story and written really well. Sometimes I'm left floundering a little when a scene ends and new one begins with no indication and I have to read back to make sure I haven't skipped anything but other than that it's all good.

Well so much for choosing between Mallory, Robin or Addison. The author has all of us trying to figure out where this is going. Guess we will have to wait and see who is behind doors number 2 and 3. Can’t wait.

Excellent continuation! Looking forward to more :)

This story is getting better as it goes along. There are four women that would like this guys attention. What a shame. What a great story. Looking forward to more.

A really exciting story. We all expect Jim and Mallory to end up together but seeing their flaws and the other interesting characters is really great.

...and you're still the one.

Great storytelling!

Keeps getting better. Can't wait for #3.

I'm really enjoying this.

But that shouldn't be a surprise since I've enjoyed all of your stories.

Very few authors here are great writers and great storytellers. You are both.

Thanks for sharing.

I like this and the way you tell a story. More substance, less sex. It is like watch a movie. I can See their faces in the story. This is a first for me and I have read tons of stories on Literotica. Plan on reading more of ur stories. Keep up the good writing.

High drama - very intense - very fun. I love it. Onward to Chapter 3. Thanks much.

Very enjoyable, not your run of the mill divorce story. I am confused a bit on the fact that he caught her blowing some dude in the parking lot and didn't confront her about her cheating till the mother's stroke. Was that before or after the fact?

Maybe it's my age but I can't keep the characters straight. And I can't figure out where this story is going. So I'm calling it a night and will try something not so deep next time.

I gave it 4 stars because you are a good writer.

It is mentally relaxing to read a good story without having to mentally correct all the grammar errorrs!

great story, a little slow paced or long, but I don't want to miss any of it. Seems like Females always jumping to wrong conclusions and jumping too quickly without all the information. Mallory and Lori with her "evidence" of adultery.

Continues to be excellent! Thank you.

My first time with this. Amazingly good.